AEAS作文之范文赏析

　　随着去澳洲留学的学生越来越多并且越来越趋于低龄化，AEAS考试也成为了很多中学生的一门热门考试。但是市面上对于AEAS的参考资料并不多，尤其是写作这一块。并且所给的范文也是很难让学生去效仿或者比较难于理解。今天Mary老师就带着大家一起分析一篇AEAS真题写作，并且附上老师的原创作文供大家学习、参考。

　　题目如下：

　　"How to be Happy" is the title of an advice column you have been invited to write for the teenage magazine Freddie and Friends.

　　Write your column advising teenagers of what they can do to ensure a happy personal life and how this will affect their family and the community.

　　You should write at least 200 words.

　　You will be assessed on:

　　The accuracy of your language

　　Your use of vocabulary

　　The content and organization of your text

　　题目要求学生为专栏写一篇题目为“如何幸福”的文章，要求30分钟内至少写200多字。评分方面，会从语言的准确性;词汇是否准确、合适、广泛;和内容和结构方面进行评分。

　　我们写作的第一步就是要分析题目，然后构思自己的作文结构，确定写几段，每一段写什么。关于幸福，很多中学生都能够想到的自己容易开心满足的一些事情，比如多交朋友，多读书，或者有的同学想到帮助别人，考试考得好等等，大家都可以展开。建议大家展开2-3段就可以，在加上开头和结尾，就是很完美的一篇作文啦。

　　How to be happy

　　Nearly everyone in this world desired for happiness, and early in ancient times, Aristotle, the great philosopher in Greek, had stated that happiness is the final goal of people. However, how to obtain happiness is a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned, to achieve happiness is not a illusory, but something teenagers can achieve easily as long as they keep an optimistic attitude towards life.

　　Firstly, they can acquire happiness through reading. Reading itself provides people with a precious time to stay alone, conducting contemplation because when they read, they are not interacting with people, but the deep thoughts of the great famous authors, philosophers, sociologists and so forth. The information and knowledge they obtain can not only equip them with the world’s best intelligent essence but also enlighten them when they feel down, exhausted and depressed. What’s more, reading can also assist people in the virtual world to be welcomed, for people always are more willing to talk and make friends with the knowledgeable.

　　Secondly, exercise is also a effective method to gain happiness. That’s mainly because exercise can bring about plenty of benefits. It keep people vigorous, positive and confident. People exercising regularly can be perfectly shaped and keep in good healthy, which is a luxury for the majority of people in modern society as there are various of chances to be attacked by disease. They can also make friends with common interest through group activities like basketball, football and even activities in gyms like yoga and dancing. And no one would deny the fact that friendship is a infinite source of happiness.

　　As we all know, laugh can be transmitted easily to others, so can happiness. An intelligent people who reads a lot can be humorous as well,so they can not only easily solve others’ problems easily and wisely, but also give the people around laughter. Even just listening the stories of the books they talk can be enjoying and relaxing. Those who exercises can also set a good model for their family and the whole community. Most people especially the teenagers tend to imitate others, and this healthy lifestyle is really an invaluable gifts for all.

　　In conclusion, happiness is not a intangible dream but an accessible thing. As long as we maintain a rich mind and keep a healthy life style such as exercise, we can be happy and help those beside us.

　　结构解析：

　　开头提出来，要有积极的生活态度就可以happy。

　　第二段：读书可以使人happy.

　　第三段：exercise 可以使人happy.

　　第四段：分析这些方面对于他人和社区的影响。

　　结尾：很多方法都可以happy。

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